Here is the revised version of a poem I wrote recently. A little bit better, but I could still chop at it I suppose! I have been writing a little, but not sharing much of it. I have been in Japan 6 months now and actually spent the first months here collaborating with my sister on some writing, who is currently an artist in Germany. So, I have started my new poetry project called “Besides the Nagara”, which is the river running through my current city, Gifu. No real meaning to it, kind of off the top of my head, but it is a beautiful spot and I like swimming there in the mornings and weekend, so I am sure it will become one of my muses! Enjoy and perhaps you will see some more scratching soon.