Thursday the 17th of Feb

February 17, 2011

Today I’ve added two pieces. The first is the third part of the short story, titled, The Trap. I hope I have adequately entertained and expressed my thoughts, so far.

The second is another poem I wrote this morning, titled “Consciousness.” If anyone has any thoughts on the meaning of this poem or stylistic suggestions, I would appreciate any feedback.

Now, onto my novel. The first part is finished and I had the intent of publishing it on my blog…however 60000 words, I have realised, is a little too much for a humble blog. So I am going to make it into a PDF or another format which can make it easily readable. I will announce when this process has been done and then if anyone has the patience to read it, then just ask and I can email it along.

Before that, however, I will give it another read and edit. As this process goes along I will post lines, paragraphs, or parts I particularly like in the story. This should give people a feel for the story.

So far I have titled the novel “Gilten” (a made up word) and the first part “Freij” after one of the characters. These will probably change, though. I have also started the second part and I hope to thrash out another 60000 to 100000 words in the next few months.

The first part starts off dark, but the over all writing style is light and hopeful. Even to the end, as things don’t turn too well, you still have some of this hope shining through. Well, the second part will be a darker journey and I’d like to show more suspense, blood, and tragedy.



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